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Goodbye

He marveled at the blueness of the sky
Through the smoke gray and black
Upon the field of battle he laid
Going on a journey from which he was
never coming back.
As he laid there in the mud
He was tempted to shed tears
A lot went through his mind
Hopes, dreams, and fears.
He felt a certain calmness
Like a wave washing over him
Somehow he just knew
His chance of living was slim.
He thought about his life
A time not long ago
Things not done
Places he never did go.
He thought about family and friends
It was see you later and not goodbye
But there would be no see you later
Only the tears they will cry.

(c)2011 T.LaFountain

posted on June 11, 2011 10:46 AM ()

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Good stuff
comment by grumpy on June 18, 2011 4:35 PM ()
I, like troutbend, immediately thought about the Civil War. Strange. The poem is beautiful and would apply to what is happening right now in a far away land.
comment by gapeach on June 12, 2011 6:09 PM ()
The title stopped me heart! Remind me to spank you the next time I see you--even if it is a great poem!
comment by greatmartin on June 11, 2011 1:20 PM ()
well Tim.The poem is lovely as usual.But do I detect a message there?
Hope that I did not.Nice to see you again.
comment by fredo on June 11, 2011 1:19 PM ()
It makes me think of the Civil War for some reason. Is that the one you had in mind?
comment by troutbend on June 11, 2011 11:10 AM ()
Um... Are u leaving us?
comment by kristilyn3 on June 11, 2011 10:59 AM ()

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