The previous post was my original...this one is the revised version after some critique from another blogger.

Which one is better?....I think this one.

As green the grass, as blue the sky,
As bright as sunbeams that shine from on high.
 Soft is the glow from the moon up above,
that glistens on petals of flowers I love.
 

The song of birds, the buzz from bees,
The purring of kittens, who wouldnt it please?
 

The crispness of dawn, the warmth of day,

and breezes that cool are sure on their way.

 

The lap of waves on shimmering sand,
the rivers, the lakes, and mountains that stand,
majestic and great, so awesome, so grand,
who wouldnt be happy, this earth was well planned.
 

The beauty of snow in winter so white,
the colors of spring, our hearts they delight.
 

The wonders of nature so glorious to see,
for all to behold, who ever they be.