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Arts & Culture > Poetry & Prose > October Moon
 

October Moon

In the blue dusk
an October moon
a pearly orb,
rose over the pines.

It was briefly snared
in the bare branches
of a tree,
like a yellow balloon.

It slowly disentangled
then freed
from gnarly grasp,
rose up to meet the stars.

susil 10/2008

posted on Oct 27, 2008 12:07 PM ()

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comment by elfie33 on Oct 31, 2008 4:21 AM ()
Nice.
comment by solitaire on Oct 29, 2008 7:09 AM ()
BEAUTIUL
comment by panthurdreams on Oct 28, 2008 4:55 PM ()
Great poem. Beautiful imagery. You should submit it to some magazines.
comment by redimpala on Oct 28, 2008 1:35 PM ()
Terrific, lady!
comment by jondude on Oct 27, 2008 6:02 PM ()
good imagery.
comment by elderjane on Oct 27, 2008 1:49 PM ()
Lovely!
comment by nittineedles on Oct 27, 2008 12:24 PM ()

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