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Final Curtain



Final Act.
Some of the dialogue remains to be written,
And who knows? There may be
One or two scene changes left too.
Yet already the stagehands reach for the lines
That will draw the curtains to their final close.
No encore. Just a finish. Life is like that, you know.

Here on the stage the experience is different
From what the audience sees and
How they witness what unfolds.
It is as if they are not privy to some of the lines, or
Maybe the actors makes omissions and changes to their scripts.
I did, and I know others did too.

Opposing leads change from beginning to end
Although I always play the starring role,
It is, after all, my life story.
Far too many villains are written into the script, and
In the end, not even I a heroine remain.
This cannot be the Playwrights best work.

Tragedy and comedy closely intertwine,
Witty and pragmatic is the comic side
But largely without laughter and mirth.
The depth of emotion and lack of tolerance
That mark a tragedy dominate the lines, as does
Social isolation and pain. No surprise.

I played my part as well as I could
Considering the draft I was handed at the start-
Too many adversaries to overcome.
Disappointed, I read the last few pages knowing
Few will remember this play once the final curtain falls.
No encore. Just a finish. Life is like that, you know.

This is a recent poem, a little dark but I did not mean it to be.

I have not written much lately. I have been here and read others posts and left comments but my own are few and far between. I find myself concerned about many of you. I worry about Jeri's son and Ted. I worry about Fredo, and I am glad Jon has new kittens to take some of the pain away from losing Hobes. Some of you post less than me. How are you? What is going on in your lives?

posted on Aug 13, 2012 8:56 AM ()

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I loved the poem but it was very dark. There are new opportunities every
day. Spend some time getting out of the house. My friends tell me that
senior citizens lunches are fun and a source of friends. Thank's for your
concern about all of us. We love you and want you to be in a better place.
Fredo and I know that life always offers new beginnings, even though
there is a lot of pain in living. Take care.
comment by elderjane on Aug 14, 2012 6:17 AM ()
Yes, I am working through my most recent disappointments- like my relationship with my son. I always hoped it would change, but he is over forty now and clings to his adolescent beliefs so I have to let go. (I wrote about his visit and how he and his wife treated me.) I am working on that "scene change". I must get back to painting! I stopped not just because of time, but because I saw all of my work as mediocre. Now I have more time, so where is my brush?
reply by dragonflyby on Aug 14, 2012 10:53 AM ()
My thoughts are always with you, Dottie. I look forward to your posts, and when there is a new one, click on it hoping to see a painting. One of these days!
comment by troutbend on Aug 13, 2012 11:22 AM ()
Yes, I must get a round tuit!
reply by dragonflyby on Aug 14, 2012 10:54 AM ()
I enjoy the Final Curtain.We also worry about you Dottie as we know what you have been through.But seemed that you are coming to your grip and getting controlled of your life.
Let hope that this is not the Final Curtain.Enjoyed this.
comment by fredo on Aug 13, 2012 9:17 AM ()
I did not mean it to be dark- just working through recent disappointments. I am ready for a "scene change".
reply by dragonflyby on Aug 14, 2012 10:55 AM ()

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