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Life & Events > Boring > A Heart Beat ...
 

A Heart Beat ...

There is one.
I lunched with her today.
I am breathless in her presence.
Everything drops away.
The air is still and the place is silent.
I am holding her eyes in mine, every single heart beat.
I think she knows, but I don't know if she knows how much.
I have to be careful here.
I have learned that.

posted on Sept 15, 2010 10:55 AM ()

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Did I miss something? Your poem is lovely but (to me) mysterious. In any case, my thoughts support you.
comment by tealstar on Sept 17, 2010 2:11 PM ()
Just a comment about a woman I had lunch with. Not a poem. I wrote it the way it came out. Nothing serious. I learned my lessons well, long ago.
reply by jondude on Sept 18, 2010 4:15 AM ()
awww, thank you Jon...that's a beautiful thing to say..
comment by aussiegirl on Sept 17, 2010 11:01 AM ()
What a romantic top you have...lol..
comment by aussiegirl on Sept 16, 2010 8:49 AM ()
The woman "knocks my hat in the creek," but you do that every time I see your picture!
reply by jondude on Sept 17, 2010 5:57 AM ()
who you been looking starry eyed at
comment by kevinhere on Sept 16, 2010 3:18 AM ()
& Flowers
comment by troutbend on Sept 15, 2010 10:21 PM ()
Ah, what are w going to do about you starry eyed 'kids'????
comment by greatmartin on Sept 15, 2010 4:57 PM ()
I hope it all goes well!
comment by kristilyn3 on Sept 15, 2010 12:40 PM ()
This is not a poem. I just wrote it off the top. A true thought or two. Oh my.
comment by jondude on Sept 15, 2010 10:56 AM ()

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