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Big Fat Manifesto by Susan Vaught


With all the talk about America's fight with obesity, particularly in relation to our youth, this book is definitely timely. The tale centers around Jamie Carcaterra, a senior in high school who is the features editor for the school newspaper as well as playing Evileen (the witch) in the school's production of The Wiz. She is working hard to succeed because she knows that winning a scholarship is really the only way she is going to get to go to college.

Her main tool for trying to get a scholarship is a weekly column in the school's paper, which is called the "Fat Girl Manifesto." Jamie is a great character who is a strong female lead. Her columns work hard to expose the treatment of girls who don't fit the mold of the thing American girl by highlighting how fashion houses are "shrinking" the sizes of clothes and how people stereotype her because of her size. She even explores the dangers of gastrci bypass surgery to confront obesity when her boyfriend decides that is an option he wants to choose. There is even an interesting romance blooming between Jamie and the Ken-lie (as in Barbie and Ken) editor-in-chief of the paper.

The problem is that even though Jamie insists that she doesn't mind her weight and is confident in the person that she is, she comes across as whiny and ranting as she writes her manifesto and looks to those around her to fit the mold of those stereotyping "fat" people.

There are also some very strong and realistic scenes as she confronts poor treatment, but reality lets go in a number of areas. For example, the school newspaper seemst o run completely on its own with no input from a sponsoring teacher, and the school play seems to be a sidebar for Jamie even though she has one of the starring roles.

The story also seems to become distracted by a number of subplots relating to Jamie's best friends, one of who is a quite humorous agent for the protection of the planet and animals. This makes the story drag on in some areas.

As a result, this is an OK book on a great topic. It is a shame it was not better because it is a message that really needs to get out there.

posted on Sept 7, 2008 1:21 PM ()

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Well, the story sounds like a good one, but the writing of it seems to be not so good (from what your review sounds like to me), so I will pass on this one. In response to Martin's comment...very few people are truly 100 percent happy with just the way they are anyway. So, like many others, I can say from experience that I am not happy about being fat, I'm not happy that I am fat, so in that sense I am not happy just the way I am. But, although I am not happy about that, I am pretty darn well happy about just about everything else..so, in reality, I am pretty happy just as I am. There are worse things than being fat and when I consider some of those things, then I sometimes don't even mind being fat anymore!
comment by donnamarie on Oct 8, 2008 8:05 PM ()
I could never believe a fat person who says they are happy just as they are--always rings false to me.
comment by greatmartin on Sept 7, 2008 3:30 PM ()

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