as i sit there in the uncomfortable camping chair, i try my hardest to get comfortable but then the fire before me is roaring it draws my attention to its sizzling hot flames.
as my grandfather throw wood into the fire(throws the victim into the fire). as my eyes grow big almost in the hyptonize stage or gazing at the fire i realize fires way to burn its victim.

as the victim is thrown into the sizzling flames of the fire... it is then tranquilized with a heat shock of a amount that is unbearable. as the heat of the flames suffocate, it wraps its orange arms around u as if it were giving you a hug. but instead of feeling all relaxed your screaming inside your brain "LET ME GO!" then burn marks start appearing on your skin as you scream bloody murder.
you start burning to a crisp...you think your almost done but then wait theres more. another victim is throw upon you. you feel their terror, you hear their screaming. it makes u tear a little if you have a soft heart. blackflashes of when you were the happiest in your life.

then all of a sudden you fall into the ashes of the other victims that have suffered just as much as you. as your doom comes to an end. the fire roars some more. an hour later your life is gone.






okay... well i dont think its that good. but i have to do a summer essay for ap english... and it has to be horror.. and it has to have some personification in there.

personification- where a thing of anykind except human has human qualities. e.i. the cloud dance happily across the sky.


so i was wondering what u think about it. personallly im not a big fan of it. but i cant think of anything else.

ohh and i know its probably a little confusing but the wood is the victim i gotta figure how to make that i little more clearer.

well leave me comments of corrections i need to add. or u have an idea or watever.

thanks :)
-sugarbears