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Tomorrow

This is no doubt the worst poem I ever wrote.

The sun is shinning outside,
but there is a shadow in my heart.
A good thing I expected to happen,
should have known it wouldn't from the start,
Instead of bliss coming my way,
it's just another ho-hum day.
Everything I had hoped for,
turned out just not to be.

As I get older, I should not dare
to hope, wish, and really care.
For things you see every where,
are not what they seem to be.
But why they elude me I begin to see,
Things just wasn't meant to be.

One thing though, I have to say,
Tomorrow will be another day.

If you figure this out, let me know because
I am more than a little confused.
--------Larry

posted on Dec 12, 2008 5:50 PM ()

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I don't understand what's so bad about this poem. It is wonderful! Many people would be grateful to be able to write something like this!!
comment by sunlight on Dec 14, 2008 11:43 PM ()
Larry, that was a beautiful poem..
comment by susil on Dec 12, 2008 9:37 PM ()

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