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Verbose Commericial

You made a commercial out of me
A merchant for a cause I can’t believe
Now my words are double underlined
Emphasizing something
That doesn’t make sense to me

I wonder if the pursuit is worth the cost
Both in human dignity and the investment lost
I’m double underlined… an icon
Kind of sickening

Cadillac cars verbose hooker
Poet for profit free slave labor
Fuck your labor of love
Fuck you
And you

A glitch a twitch a writhing pain
Bring on the income
Bring on the gain
Everyone needs a little more
Of everything I do
You remind me

You made a commercial out of me
Now what?
10% of my heart, a penny per click
All of that for what
Just to make me sick
….slick

posted on Mar 18, 2008 9:25 AM ()

Comments:

Cute poem.
comment by sunlight on Apr 9, 2008 2:16 AM ()
I love that it underlines commercial and merchant for you. LOL

seriously though, if you have a gripe write a blog that isn't a poem and you will probably get a better response
comment by jtruant on Mar 18, 2008 9:54 AM ()
You are exchanging a service for a service. Nothing is free.
comment by mmmhollywould on Mar 18, 2008 9:42 AM ()

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